The second key is eliminating unnecessary words. Qualifiers such as very, fairly, and quite rarely add meaning. In fact, because they’re so overused, they often have the opposite effect.
Many commonly used phrases include useless words. Some wordy phrases and their replacements are listed below:
Replace: | With: |
along the lines of | like |
a majority of | most |
a majority of the time | usually |
as a general rule | generally |
as per | as, according to |
as soon as | when |
at your earliest convenience | soon or by x date |
as you may or may not know | as you may know |
at a later date | later |
at all times | always |
at this point in time | now |
avail oneself of | use |
by means of | by |
can be in a position to | can |
due to the fact that | because |
during the time that | while |
for the purpose of | for |
free of charge | free |
have a tendency to | tend to |
inasmuch as | because |
in accordance with | according to |
in advance of | before |
in all probability | probably |
in connection with | about |
in many instances | often |
in order that, in order to | to |
in reference to, in regard to | about |
in spite of the fact that | although |
in the amount of | for |
in the event that | if |
in the matter of | about |
in the near future | soon |
in this day and age | nowadays, now |
in view of the fact that | because |
make a recommendation that | recommend |
of a confidential nature | confidential |
on account of the fact that | because |
on the grounds that | because |
owing to the fact that | because |
perform an analysis of | analyze |
pertaining to | about |
prior to | before |
pursuant to | since |
the question as to whether | whether |
regarding the matter of | about |
subsequent to | after, since |
the writer, the undersigned | I, me |
up to this writing | until now |
Other phrases are redundant:
Replace: | With: |
absolutely perfect | perfect |
actual experience | experience |
adding together | adding |
advance planning | planning |
and et cetera | et cetera |
any and all | all |
at about | about |
basic essentials or basic fundamentals | basics, essentials, fundamentals |
both together | together |
cancel out | cancel |
check into | check |
close proximity | near |
combine into one | combine |
complete stop | stop |
completely full | full |
consensus of opinion | consensus |
continue on | continue |
cooperate together | cooperate |
current status | status |
customary practice | practice |
desirable benefits | benefits |
each and every | each or every |
end result | result |
enter into | enter |
exactly equal | equal |
final outcome | outcome |
first and foremost | first |
first priority | priority |
free gift | gift |
future projections | projections |
goals and objectives | goals |
group meeting | meeting |
honest truth | truth |
joined together | joined |
new innovation | innovation |
no doubt but | no doubt |
one and the same | the same |
outside of | outside |
over with | over |
past experience | experience |
past history | history |
personal opinion | opinion |
point in time | time |
range all the way from | range from |
the reason is because | the reason is or because |
reduce down | reduce |
refer back to | refer to |
repeat again | repeat |
resume again | resume |
small/large in size | small/large |
totally empty | empty |
this particular instance | this instance |
3 a.m. in the morning; 3 p.m. in the afternoon | 3 a.m., 3 p.m. |
whether or not | whether |
young in age | young |
The third key to being clear and concise is using short sentences and paragraphs. Try to keep sentences to between 20 and 25 words. Or simply break up sentences that extend more than two lines.
In general, no paragraph should include more than one or two ideas, and a paragraph of more than six sentences or 10 to 12 lines is almost always too long. When in doubt, split paragraphs in two at logical breaking points. The same goes for sentences.
You don’t want your writing to sound stilted. Varying sentence length and structure can help prevent this. Read your writing out loud to make sure it sounds natural.
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